Hi guys this is my first apple script so tell me what you think!

Question

Hi guys this is my first apple script so tell me what you think
display dialog "Daily morning routine will now open"
say "Good morning I will now play your playlist,"
say "Ok now i will open up your wmail and look for new mail"
open application "iTunes"
tell application "iTunes" to play library playlist
--Note: This tells itunes to play the library
open application "Mail"
tell application "Mail" to check for new mail
--Note: This tells mail to open and check for new email
say "your new mail is waiting to be selected,"
--Note: This lets the user get an update on what the CPU is doing
say "I will now open up your weather, and trafic conditions,"
display dialog "Please enter your zip codes on both sights"
tell application "Safari" to open location "http://www.weather.com/"
say "please enter you zip code"
tell application "Safari" to open location "http://www.traffic.com"
say "once again please enter your zip code"
--Note: This tells safari to open up the twp web sights listed

Answer 1

So far, so good, and welcome to AppleScript - you could save yourself a little typing by using a timeout with your first dialog and building the URLs with your zip code (I just looked at the URL bar):
display dialog "Daily morning routine will now open" giving up after 4
set ZipCode to "95014" -- change as needed
open location "http://www.weather.com/weather/local/" & ZipCode & "?lswe=" & ZipCode & "&lwsa=WeatherLocalUndeclared&from=whatwhere"
open location "http://my.traffic.com/Controller?appname=mytraffic&workflowname=routing&pointA=" & ZipCode & "&pointB=" & ZipCode