I'm STUCK, inside is a track I'm working on let me know what you think!

http://kiwi6.com/file?id=yw9cit4vaf is the link to download the mp3 file.
I started using Logic Pro a few months ago, and I've purchased the training books. I've been working on this for about 3 days now and I know my voice isn't a singing voice, but I don't wanna use anyone else's voice until I've mastered the program .
What I'm looking for here is things to improve on; things I can add to make it sound better. How I can continue the song, I only have the instruments that come w/ logic, and I just go through each one, play the song and hit a few notes to see if the instrument sounds good and if it doesn't i continue looking (I'm still learning how to edit the sound of each beat as well as using plug ins). What method do you use to combine instruments? What's the general rule? (Do they have to be the same pitch?) I'm also having trouble switching up the beat (as they do in all songs) I'll start the song out w/ 3-4 tracks that I'll be happy w/ then after about 10-15 seconds it's time to add something new to the ear yet it never seems to piece together right for me. Any advice would be soo appreciated!

Hi Clinton,
What you're looking for it seems is some subjective input on how to write a song. Given the huge variables involved, I don't think too many people here will dive into it detailed responses given this board is more focused on the mechanics of using the software, not the creative process.
That said, I use Logic because of the enormous amount of possibilities it puts at your fingertips, and what you are doing by just trying something, then moving onto try something else to see if it works better IS creative songwriting and not a bad way to go about it. Don't worry so much about the process, learn the tools and just do it until you come on something that sounds right/good/gels. Then "save" and back it up.
Steve.
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