I'm struggling with my (4 years) old homework

Question

hi,
4+ years ago i took some basic programming course where we had to write various (extremely simple) java code.
but i didn't turn in my homework in time, because i couldn't et my source code tho rhyme (excuse as good as any)
nayhow, now finally while as was reading article http://www.loyalty.org/~schoen/haiku.html
i realized, that i could (maybe) solve my first programming task as haiku, or two of them...
task was simple: (to get a bit more familiar with language) write programm that writes something to terminal.
and what i came up with is so far:
public class Haiku {
    transient static String done;
    public static void
            main(String[] arguments) {
        done = "my first java homework";
        System.out.print(done);
}what the problem is, is that i would like some more english speaking person to verify that both code blocks are indeed 5-7-5 syllibles (ps. i choose not to pronaunce non-word characters)
and in case you have any of your code written as poems haikus or as pictures, then feel free to share :)

Answer 1

Modified to take YAT's comments into account:public class Haiku {
    transient static String done;
    public static void
    main(String[] args) {
        done = "my first java";
        System.out.print(done);
}Grant