Site critique please

http://web.mac.com/jimpsky/Secondtography/Home.html
Just a very quick look over and any brief improvement ideas would be appreciated muchly as always.
love feedback.
You guys ROOoock.
p.s
The clientele for my site are Secondlife users.

opinion/suggestion:
It's pretty good, could be better. The "you drink we drive" doesn't work here followed by "you dream it..." Something easy to "get" that really holds together and gets across what you're offering is what you need. Something like "you drink while we create it" would be better - just to make the point.
Once the viewer knows what you're up to (are you selling photos?) you're on your way. Everything following depends on what goes before. So get that going and then ask again even if you get good ideas between now and then.

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got a new index page up but would love a litle advise -- no
need to pull punches --
have a small question though -- when i reduce my browser size
things fly out -- any ideas on how to fix
index page www.healthhokkaido.com
many thanks to anyone who takes their time to help out

Your coding style is flawed, and by using an XHTML doctype,
you are being
trapped by it. For example, this error -
Error Line 89 column 23: document type does not allow element
"li" here;
missing one of "ul", "ol", "menu", "dir" start-tag.
<li class="page_item"><a
href="
http://www.healthhokkaido.com/files/google_map.refers
to this snip of
code -
<li class="current_page_item"><a
href="
http://www.healthhokkaido.com">home</a>
<li class="page_item"><a
href="
http://www.healthhokkaido.com/files/google_map.cfm">hospitals</a>
Notice that you have NOT terminated the <li> tags
properly. XHTML is
catching this as an error, and telling you that you cannot
have a <li>
inside a <li> tag, which is what your code appears to
be saying.
In addition, you have a number of these errors -
Error Line 125 column 10: ID "suckertree1" already defined.
<ul id="suckertree1">which mean that you are using the
same ID attributes
on more than one page element - that's not allowed. ID values
MUST be
unique on a page.
And this line -
Error Line 172 column 86: end tag for "img" omitted, but
OMITTAG NO was
specified.
...b.jpg" alt="" width="50" height="50"> which
means that you have an
XHTML doctype, but you are using HTML tag syntax -
<img ...>
instead of the required XHTML syntax -
<img ... />
Also, you have this -
Error Line 177 column 18: an attribute value specification
must be an
attribute value literal unless SHORTTAG YES is specified.

which means that you have not properly enclosed your
attribute values in
quotes.
And this -
Error Line 192 column 32: required attribute "action" not
specified.
<form id=wf_Testform method=post>which means that you
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And, of course, the zillions of unspecified alt attributes on
your
images....
See - like that....
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"quiero mas" <[email protected]> wrote in message
news:[email protected]...
> Hi Everyone benn through and fixed as many of the errors
as possible -
> still a
> little confused why i have still 132 errors
>
>
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=www.healthhokkaido.com
>
> It says i am missing elements which are there please
view source
>
http://www.healthhokkaido.com
>
> Q2 - the page still breaks up when reduced any ideas
>
> Many thanks
> Mark
>
> coordinator health hokkaido
>

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