External preloader script problem

Question

hi, i'm try to create an external preloader, i've made three layers (the script, one for a funky design of my logo and keep things simple i've also embedded the preloader text in this layer and finally the preloader bar beneath. i've created two frames for each layer, the script has two keyframes, the other layers only have a keyframe first then a standard frame. i can't get it work though, please help. here's the script i'm using on the second keyframe.
var loader:MovieClipLoader = new MovieClipLoader();
this.createEmptyMovieClip("Empty_movieclip",1);
loader.loadClip("Creative-Outrage.swf",Empty_movieclip);
var preload:Object = new Object();
loader.addListener(preload);
preload.onLoadProgress = function (target, loadedBytes, totalBytes){
if (_root.getBytesTotal() != _root.getBytesLoaded()){
gotoAndPlay(1);
else (loadMovie("Creative-Outrage.swf",Empty_movieclip));
removeMovieClip("Preloader_movieclip");
Bar_movieclip._xscale=(_root.getBytesLoaded()/_root.getBytesTotal())*100;
Preloader_movieclip.Loader_text.text=Math.round((_root.getBytesLoaded()/_root.getBytesTota l())*100)+"% Complete";

Answer 1

try: 
var loader:MovieClipLoader = new MovieClipLoader();
this.createEmptyMovieClip("Empty_movieclip",1);
// move the next line to the end of your code
loader.loadClip("Creative-Outrage.swf",Empty_movieclip);
var preload:Object = new Object();
loader.addListener(preload);
// the next two lines should be in preload.onLoadProgress
//Preloader_movieclip.Bar_movieclip._xscale=(loadedBytes/totalBytes)*100;
//Preloader_movieclip.Loader_text=Math.round((loadedBytes/totalBytes)*100)+"% Complete";
preload.onLoadProgress = function (target,loadedBytes,totalBytes){
if (loadedBytes = totalBytes){
// (loadMovie("Creative-Outrage.swf",Empty_movieclip));  <-- comment out or remove this line
removeMovieClip("Preloader_movieclip");
else {
gotoAndPlay(1);
it's still not displaying any gradual progress, it just displays the full progress bar immediately even when i simulate a download and it's not loading the external file either.