Modify shell script to work with other folders

Question

i am trying to modify a shell script that sorts files in a course folder into sub folders by month. I have a shell script that works, but when i try to modify it for another course folder it quits working. can someone let me know what i am doing wrong?
the working shell script:
do shell script "
for f in \"$HOME/Desktop/DWI Annual Report/\"*
do if [ ! -d \"$f\" ]; then
x=\"${f%%.*}\"
i=$((${#x}-3))
if [ -d \"$HOME/Desktop/DWI monthly/${f:$i:3}\" ]; then
mv \"$f\" \"$HOME/Desktop/DWI monthly/${f:$i:3}\"
fi
fi
done"
the nonworking modified script:
do shell script "
for f in \"$HOME/Desktop/DOEP Annual Report/\"*
do
    if [ ! -d \"$f\" ]; then
        x=\"${f%%.*}\"
        i=$((${#x}-3))
        if [  -d \"$HOME/Desktop/DOEP monthly/${f:$i:3}\" ]; then
            mv \"$f\" \"$HOME/Desktop/DOEP monthly/${f:$i:3}\"
        fi
    fi
done"

Answer 1

ok here is the applescript that works.
property total_student : 1
tell application "Finder"
  set master_path to alias "Users:macbook:Desktop:DWI Annual Report:Annual Report.xlsx"
  set filesWithDWI to get every file of folder ((path to desktop folder) & "DWI Annual Report" as string) whose name contains "DWI"
  repeat with f in filesWithDWI
  my transfer_data(f, master_path)
  end repeat
end tell
on transfer_data(child_path, master_path)
  tell application "Microsoft Excel"
  set child_book to (open workbook workbook file name (child_path as string))
  set child_doc to worksheet 1 of child_book
  set master to worksheet "sheet 1" of (open workbook workbook file name (master_path as string))
  set num to 15 --All lists start at index 12 or later, I'm putting 10 to be safe
  set students to {}
  tell child_doc --grab values from child document
  repeat until (value of cell (("A" & num) as string)) is 1
  set num to num + 1
  end repeat
  repeat until (value of cell (("B" & num) as string)) is ""
  set end of students to {namevalue of cell (("B" & num) as string)), driver_idvalue of cell (("C" & num) as string)), DOBvalue of cell (("D" & num) as string)), Ref_Recvalue of cell (("I" & num) as string)), pre_testvalue of cell (("J" & num) as string)), post_testvalue of cell (("K" & num) as string)), cert_idvalue of cell (("L" & num) as string))}
set num to num + 1
  end repeat
  set startdate to range "C7"
  set classlocation to range "C11"
  set instructor to range "H7"
  end tell
  tell master
  set num to 7
  log (value of cell (("B" & num) as string))
  repeat until (value of cell (("B" & num) as string)) is ""
  set num to num + 1
  end repeat
  repeat with student in students
  set value of cell (("A" & num) as string) to total_student
  set value of cell (("B" & num) as string) to name of student
  set value of cell (("C" & num) as string) to driver_id of student
  set value of cell (("D" & num) as string) to DOB of student
  set value of cell (("H" & num) as string) to pre_test of student
  set value of cell (("I" & num) as string) to post_test of student
  set value of cell (("J" & num) as string) to cert_id of student
  set value of cell (("f" & num) as string) to startdate
  set value of cell (("E" & num) as string) to classlocation
  set value of cell (("G" & num) as string) to instructor
  set value of cell (("K" & num) as string) to Ref_Rec of student
  set num to num + 1
  set total_student to total_student + 1
  end repeat
  end tell
  save child_book
  close child_book
  save active workbook in master_path
  close active workbook
  end tell
end transfer_data
do shell script "
for f in \"$HOME/Desktop/DWI Annual Report/\"*
do
    if [ ! -d \"$f\" ]; then
        x=\"${f%%.*}\"
        i=$((${#x}-3))
        if [  -d \"$HOME/Desktop/DWI monthly/${f:$i:3}\" ]; then
            mv \"$f\" \"$HOME/Desktop/DWI monthly/${f:$i:3}\"
        fi
    fi
done"
It takes the class rosters and copies the information from the class roster to the annual report and then moves the file to the monthly  folder and files it in the appropriate months folder based on the last three letters of the file name.